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【题目】请根据以下信息写一封email。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入句子数。

【写作要求】

活动1		参观伦敦科学博物馆（London Science Museum），了解现代科技和发明，了解克隆多利羊的详细过程。
活动2		坐船观光泰晤士（the Thames）河沿岸数十个历史文化景点。
活动3		参观伦敦南部的环球剧场（Globe Theatre）。建于1599年，客家囤屋（Hakka circular house）形状，可容纳1600人，夏季晚上有一系列戏剧演出。
对Tom此行收获的期待	……

注意句子之间的衔接过渡，有意识地结合所学的非谓语短语和各类从句的使用。

注意：句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。词数100词左右。

Dear Tom,

On hearing that you are planning to tour London this summer vacation. I’d like to recommend something you can’t miss over there.

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Have a good trip and good luck!

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

On hearing that you are planning to your London this summer vacation. I’d like to recommend something you can’t miss over there.

Fist of all, if you want to learn how modern technology is going on as well as how inventions change our life, then you can visit London Science Museum, which also informs you of the detailed procedure in cloning Dolly the sheep. Besides, it’s worthwhile taking a boat trip along the Thames, where dozens of historical and cultural attractions are waiting for your sightseeing. What you can’t overlook is the Globe Theatre located in the south of London. In the shape of a Hakka circular house and built in 1599, it can house 1600 audience and is home to a series of plays in summer evenings.

Visiting these local destinations will surely enrich your trip to London and result in a fruitful yet special vacation.

Have a good trip and good luck!

Tim

【解析】

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