Question

短文写作。(30分)　根据以下提示，结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Encouragement from a friend plays a very important role in motivating(激励) you to solve the problems you are facing. It helps you fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable（不利的） situation you are stuck in.

（1）无须写标题，文章开头已经给出，不得照抄英语提示语。（2）除诗歌外，文体不限。

（3）文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；（4）词数为120左右。

Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.                          

                                                                                   

 

Answer 1

【答案】

A possible version:

As an old saying goes, “Encouragement is to us what sunshine is to trees. It is universally acknowledged that encouragement plays an essential part in our daily life.

As is vividly depicted in the sentence, there was a time when I was not interested in my work. My grades had gone from bad to worse. Fortunately, my teacher thought highly of me, saying I was the most intelligent student in my class, now I attributed my great progress to her encouragement. On the assumption that I hadn’t received her encouragement, I couldn’t have made such great progress.

As far as I am aware, under no circumstances can we ignore the significance of encouragement. It is conceivable that encouragement enables us to live normally. Personally, I think it is encouragement that helps us get out of an unfavorable situation you are stuck in.

So important is encouragement that we can’t emphasize the significance of encouragement too much. Furthermore, there is no denying that encouragement helps us grow up in a healthy way both mentally and physically.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于开放性作文，要求学生发表关于鼓励的短文。可以从激励对学生的心理，行动以及从自己的个人经历来说明鼓励对学生的积极作用。在写作的时候要从文章整体的谋篇布局以及选词和造句方面多下功夫。

考点：考查开放性作文的写作

点评：本文考查了开放性作文的写作，话题是考生很熟悉的激励的作用。在写作时候注意选择高级词汇和高级句型来提高文章的层次和文采，同时要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。在文章中最好使用谚语，来作为最大的亮点。