题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你们学校将在下周二晚举办五月艺术文化节晚会(Art and Culture Evening)。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封信邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 发出邀请
2. 晚会时间,地点;
3. 校长讲话及节目表演等活动内容。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Eric,
How is everything going? I'm writing to invite you to the Art and Culture Evening to be held in our school hall on the evening of next Tuesday.
With the aim of celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding of our motherland and singing praise of great achievements we have achieved over the past seven decades, the show will put on a variety of amazing performances such as singing, dancing and reciting classics. I believe these colorful performances will leave a favorable impression on all international students like you. From where I stand, the show is extremely meaningful. Not only does it enable us to get a better understanding of our motherland, but also it inspires us to work harder and make great contributions to our country. What is the most important is that our headmaster will deliver a speech at that night.
If you are interested, please let me know. Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信,邀请留学生朋友参加学校的文化艺术节。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 发出邀请
2. 具体内容
1)晚会时间,地点;
2)校长讲话及节目表演等活动内容。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
with the aim of; put on; a variety of; such as; leave an impression on; make great contributions to; deliver a speech; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. How is everything going?
2. I'm writing to invite you to the Art and Culture Evening to be held in our school hall on the evening of next Tuesday.
3. With the aim of celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding of our motherland and singing praise of great achievements we have achieved over the past seven decades, the show will put on a variety of amazing performances such as singing, dancing and reciting classics.
4. I believe these colorful performances will leave a favorable impression on all international students like you.
5. From where I stand, the show is extremely meaningful.
6. Not only does it enable us to get a better understanding of our motherland, but also it inspires us to work harder and make great contributions to our country.
7. What is the most important is that our headmaster will deliver a speech at that night.
8. If you are interested, please let me know. Looking forward to your arrival.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【题目】假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。5月19日是中国旅游日,英文报刊 Teens Senior面向中学生就旅游话题征稿。请根据以下表格内容向其投稿,简单介绍近现代中国旅游业的发展,并畅想它的未来。
注意:1.请适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数不少于60
提示词:旅游业 tourism
中国旅行社 China Travel Service
过去 | 1927年,中国第一家旅行社——中国旅行社诞生 80年代初,旅游也开始快速发展 |
现在 | 游客增多 行程舒适 选择多样 |
将来 | …… |
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