Question

1．假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言．请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿．
1．过去对成年的向往；
2．现在的感受和认识；
3．将来的目标及措施．
参考词汇：责任 responsibility
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）
Good morning，everyone！
The topic of my speech today is"thoughts on becoming a grown-up"．
As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked．
Now I'm a grown-up，but I find things do not go as I expected． Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this，but also more responsibilities． I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．
To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university．、Thank you for your listening．．

Answer 1

分析 本作文为应用文，根据所给要点内容写一篇在校成人仪式上的发言稿，属于提纲作文．时态为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称以第一人称为主．重要短语：grow up （成长），not only …，but also（不但…而且），reach the goal （实现目标…），try one's best…（努力做），enter a good university（上好大学）．

解答 Good morning，everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"Thoughts on becoming a grown-up．"
As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked．【高分句型】（过去对成年的向往）
Now I'm a grown-up，but I find things do not go as I expected．（现在的感受）Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this，but also more responsibilities．【高分句型】（现在的认识）I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．（将来的目标）
To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university．（要采取的措施）
 
 Thank you for your listening．

点评 写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，并充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．