题目内容
随着“开心农场”“QQ农场”等娱乐游戏风靡互联网,许多中学生也加入了偷菜的行列。请你根据下表的内容,用英语写一篇短文,并谈谈你个人的看法。
| 现 象 | 1. 沉迷其中,乐此不疲;2. 身在课堂,心在农场; 3. 作业拖拉,成绩下降。 |
| 原 因 | 1. 寻找农耕的乐趣; 2. 释放学习的压力;3. 拉近朋友的距离。 |
| 你的看法 | ……(至少两点) |
注意: 1. 不要逐字翻译表格提示内容,应适当发挥。
2. 开头已给出,不算入总词数。
3. 词数:150左右。
Nowadays, QQ Farm and Happy Farm are very popular among people from all walks of
life. A large number of middle school students are also involved in the game.
Nowadays, QQ Farm and Happy Farm are very popular among people from all walks of life. A large number of middle school students are also involved in the game.
Some of them are addicted to it and take great delight in stealing vegetables online. In class, their minds are still wandering around the farm. They waste too much time on it so that they fail to hand in their homework in time and there is a sharp decline in their grades.
Many factors contribute to the popularity of the game. To begin with, it enables students to
experience the pleasure of farming , which is beyond their reach in reality. In addition, students are under great pressure and farming online is a good way for them to relax. It can also bring friends closer and closer.
As far as I am concerned, though the game is really great fun, as senior students, we are
supposed to focus on our studies. Also, I suggest schools starting after-school farming activities. Only in this way can students experience real happiness in farming.
解析:
1.评分原则:
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2.各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档(21—25分)
1)完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2)准确、清楚地表达了所要求的内容,要点无遗漏,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
3) 语法结构和词汇有少许错误,但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致;具备较强的语言应用能力。
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第四档(16—20分)