Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你被学校选为代表，将在送别美国交流生的欢送会上进行发言。请根据以下提示写一篇英文发言稿。

1. 回忆你们共同的经历；

2. 谈谈收获；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear friends,

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Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

How time flies. It has been two months since you came to our school for the exchange program, which has benefited all of us. During the past two months, we have studied in the same classroom and lived in the same dormitory, which has enabled us to know each other better. Doing the same sports on the playground gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship. I believe that the students in our school have learned a lot from the exchange program.

At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish you a safe and happy journey home and hope that there will be more programs like this in the future.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】首先审题，要求作为学生代表在欢送会上发言，写一篇发言稿。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容1.回忆共同经历； 2.谈谈收获和感受； 3.表达祝愿。抓住了这些要点就抓住了文章的核心内容。一定要注意发言稿的用语和格式。其次选用正确的人称和时态，考虑用一般现在时，第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意: 1、提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充； 2、为使文章层次清楚，可分三个自然段写：第一自然段回忆共同经历；第二自然段对自己的收获和感受进行总结；第三自然段表示感谢。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【本文亮点】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: on behalf of代表， enable sb. to do sth.使某人做某事，promote our friendship促进我们的友谊，等等。还使用了定语从句During the past two months, we have studied in the same classroom and lived in the same dormitory, which has enabled us to know each other better.和宾语从句I believe that the students in our school have learned a lot from the exchange program.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。