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假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
3 必须按答题要求做题，否则不计分。
Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends, while I chose to take a part-time job to gain experiences and earn some money. I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking after students with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope. The pay were 10 cents per envelope. I headed for the company, feel sure I would easy finish 300 envelops in five hours and to earn the money. Actually, I only finished 200. Now, I fully understand how hard is to earn money. Getting out of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all.


【小题1】decide改成decided
【小题2】experiences改成 experience
【小题3】after改成 for
【小题4】envelope 改成envelopes
【小题5】were改成was
【小题6】feel改成 feeling
【小题7】easy改成easily
【小题8】去掉to   
【小题9】在hard 后加it 
【小题10】we改成 us

解析试题分析：文章讲述作者寒假在一家公司做兼职的经历，通过这件事，作者了解挣钱是很不容易的事情。
【小题1】去年冬天，我的同学决定和朋友去旅游。因为是：Last winter vacation所以用一般过去式： decide改成decided
【小题2】而我选择做一份兼职工作获得经验，挣些钱。Experience做为“经验”讲的时候，是不可数名词。
【小题3】我从老师那里得知附近的一个公司在找书法好的学生在信封上写地址。Look after“照顾”，改成 look for寻找，
【小题4】envelope 是可数名词，这里是复数，改成envelopes
【小题5】报酬是每个信封10便士。这句话的主语是the pay，所以谓语是单数：were改成was
【小题6】我前往公司，确信我5个小时可以轻松的完成300个信封并挣些钱。这里用现在分词做状语：feel改成 feeling
【小题7】easy是形容词，做表语或定语，这里修饰动词finish，需要副词，改成easily
【小题8】finish 300 envelops 和 earn the money是并列关系，去掉to   
【小题9】现在我理解挣钱是多么难啊。这里使用it做形式主语，在hard 后加it 
【小题10】走出教室对我们所有的人都是很必要的。介词for后面接宾格：we改成 us
考点：考查短文改错

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