Question

【题目】现在的孩子由于被父母管教，呵护太多，渐渐失去一些自我管理和生活能力。当独自一个人时就会难以自律，甚至会加剧一些不良习惯。假如你一个人在家时，你觉得你该怎样做才能有利于自己的成长？请以Alone at home为题写一篇短文。

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1．内容需涵盖2-3个具体做法。

2．字数：120左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Alone at homeAt present，most parents are worried a lot about their children，so they care about them too much．Under the parents’ control，the children have lost interest in many things．When we are at home，we often lose control of ourselves，so our parents will feel more worried and promise never to let us alone at home．To comfort our parents，what should we do while alone at home？In fact，there is a lot interesting to do except surfing on the Internet，playing games and so on．In my opinion，we should read books and do our homework first．Then，we may listen to some music and read some books and newspapers．Also，we can take some exercise to keep fit．I believe that if we do so，our parents will give us more free time and never be worried about our being alone at home．

【解析】本文主要从父母对孩子管制太多以致于不敢让孩子单独呆在家里入手，引出孩子在家应该做些什么以让父母放心。第二段作者提出了自己的观点，单独一人在家应该做些什么，多做些有益身心成长的事情，这样父母就不会再为孩子担心了。文中使用了under the control of，keep fit等高级短语；也使用了our being alone at home动名词短语作宾语；还使用了believe的宾语从句，从句中又加入了if条件句；还使用四次了不定式等等，充分说明该作者深厚的语言功底。