Question

12．假定你是李华，计划暑假期间到英国University of Nottingham学习英语，为期三个月，学习期间想找一份兼职工作．请给英国的朋友Anna写信求助，要点如下：
1．你的学习安排；
2．做兼职的原因；
3．可胜任的工作（餐厅服务员、儿童汉语教师…）．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Anna，
How are you doing？I'm planning to go to the UK to take a three-month English course at the University of Nottingham after graduation in June．It's quite expensive but I'm hoping to improve my pronunciation．
To help cover the costs of my study，I aim to find a part-time job．It's also a good way to practice my oral English and develop a better understanding of the British society．So I'm wondering if you could ask around your friends to see if anyone wants a waiter in the restaurant or a Chinese teacher for their children．I would appreciate it very much if you can help me．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇求助信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一暑假期间的计划；二做兼职的原因；三提出请求以及可胜任的工作．
高分句型：
1．To help cover the costs of my study，I aim to find a part-time job句子里cover表示"足以支付；够付"
；aim to 表示"打算做"．
为了支付我的学习费用，我打算找一份兼职工作．
2．So I'm wondering if you could ask around your friends to see if anyone wants a waiter in the restaurant or a Chinese teacher for their children．句子里第一个 if 引导I'm wondering 的宾语从句，表示"是否"；第二个if引导you could ask around your friends to see 的宾语从句．
因此我想要知道你是否可以问问你周围的朋友是否有人想要一个饭店的服务员或者教他们的孩子的汉语老师．

解答 Possible version：
Dear Anna，
    How are you doing？I'm planning to go to the UK to take a three-month English course at the University of Nottingham after graduation in June．It's quite expensive but I'm hoping to improve my pronunciation．（暑假期间的计划）
    To help cover the costs of my study，I aim to find a part-time job．【高分句型一】It's also a good way to practice my oral English and develop a better understanding of the British society．（做兼职的原因）So I'm wondering if you could ask around your friends to see if anyone wants a waiter in the restaurant or a Chinese teacher for their children．【高分句型二】I would appreciate it very much if you can help me．（提出请求以及可胜任的工作）
    Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作．
写作时，在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来．表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误．