题目内容
作为一名清流一中即将毕业的高三学生。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对高三生活的看法。
(1) 对已经获得的帮助表示感谢;
(2) 对毕业后生活的规划;
(3) 对学弟、学妹的建议。
要求:1.词数:120左右(开头己给出,不计入总词数);
2.在答题卡上作答。
High school is regarded as the best time in a person’s life.As a senior 3 student,it won’t take long before I graduate.__________________________________
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One possible version:
High school is regarded as the best time in a person’life. As a senior 3 student, it won’t take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different.
Secondly, I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study at college,for I believe hard work is the key to success. Meanwhile, physical exercise and entertainments are also necessary. Life without sunshine and laughter is bound to be a failure.
Finally I hope that all the younger fellows always keep your dream in mind, by which you will be highly motivated all the time, without doubt or hesitation. Even if sometimes you are lazy, tell yourself that tomorrow holds the miracle. Just one more day may be all it will take to realize your dream.
【解析】
试题分析:本文要求以高三毕业生的名义写一篇作文,谈谈对高三生活的看法。要点包括:对已经获得的帮助表示感谢;
对毕业后生活的规划以及对学弟、学妹的建议。根据提示信息可知写作时要注意以下方面:1.提出建议部分可以使用一般现在时,对毕业后的规划可以使用一般将来时。2.使用第一人称。3.写作时要注意使用恰当的连接词和插入语,以使文章内容连贯,条理分明。4.注意使用高级词汇和多种句式,比如定语从句,状语从句等。4.字数120字左右,注意标点符号的正确使用。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面。作者使用了Firstly, Secondly, Finally三个表示顺序的词分别引起三段内容,包括了表达感激之情、对未来的规划和对学弟学妹提出建议等三个方面的要点。这样的结构安排使文章层次分明,脉络清晰。文中使用了appreciation、Meanwhile、is bound to、keep sth in mind, be highly motivated ,without doubt等很多高级词汇和短语,增添了文章的亮点。此外,作者还使用了定语从句it will take to realize your dream,原因状语从句for I believe hard work is the key to success.和让步状语从句 Even if sometimes you are lazy,等多种句式结构,使文章语言富于变化。
考点:考查提纲作文