题目内容
14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
All of us know the old saying"Practice make perfect"．It tells us unless we want to realize our aim，we should practise and one day we will make it．It's easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming．At first I found difficult to control my body．I just sink into the water．I felt very frightening．Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed．I went to the swimming pool every day，learned from them and practised．A day，when my friend pushed me into the swimming pool，I sudden found that I could swim．How excited I was!Now I can swim much more better than before．
分析 本文主要介绍"熟能生巧"这个谚语的含义，即：如果我们要想要实现我们的目标，只要我们不断地练习，最终会成功的．
解答 All of us know the old saying"Practice make perfect"．It tells us unless we want to realize our aim，we should practise and one day we will make it．It's easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming．At first I found∧difficult to control my body．I just sink into the water．I felt very frightening．Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed．I went to the swimming pool every day，learned from them and practised．A day，when my friend pushed me into the swimming pool，I sudden found that I could swim．How excited I was!Now I can swim much more better than before．
详解：
1．make改为makes 考查主谓一致．practice是名词，表示单数概念，谓语动词也应是单数三人称形式，即makes．
2．unless改为if 考查连词．根据句意：它告诉我们如果我们想要实现我们的目标，我们应当练习直到有一天人们成功．用if引导条件状语从句．
3．found后加it 考查it用法．在句型find+it+adj．+do sth．中，it是形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的动词不定式to do sth．
4．sink改为sank 考查动词时态．讲述的是已发生的事情，要用一般过去时态．
5．frightening改为frightened 考查过去分词．过去分词作表语，多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化，其主语多半是人．
6．them改为it 考查代词．it指代swimming．
7．succeed改为success 考查词语用法．to是介词，后接名词，the key to…意为"…的关键"，是固定搭配．
8．A改为One 考查词语用法．强调"过去的某一天"，用数词one．
9．sudden变为suddenly 考查副词．find是动词，用副词修饰，形容词sudden的副词是suddenly．
10．去掉more 考查比较级．better本身是比较，不要再加more构成比较级．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
There is no chance of children getting bored in the holidays with these action-packed weeks of fun and games．Days begin with team building activities to help"break the ice"and get the children in the mood．The wonderfully safe and secure environment of Port Regis enables the children to explore the woods and enjoy their own creative play．
WEEK 1：Festival of Sport （Monday 22nd July to Friday 26th July）
The summer activities kick-off with a wonderful week of sporting fun including cricket，athletics other great team games．Swims in the pool and games in the gym．
WEEK 2：Let's Go Wild （Monday 29th July to Friday 2nd August）
A Whole week in the great outdoors with treasure hunts，camp bed and cave building along with amazing team games in woods．This week guarantees to be like no other．Navigate yourself through the huge spiders'web and guide balls through the huge ball maze…this is a great week for making new friends．
WEEK 3：Sporting Madness （Monday 5th August to Friday 9th August）
A wild and strange week of tournaments and team（both traiditional and a few of the homemade variety） games，but be warned，you might get wet!Arts and crafts，fun in the gym and swims in the pool make this a hard week．Besides exhaustion you'd better learn to get used to challenges and accept any result．Activities will be dependent on the weather．
WEEK 4：Make a Racquet（球拍）（Monday 12th August to Friday 16th August）
What a racquet this week brings with all the bat，racquet and club sportd you could wish for…crazy golf，tennis，hadmintion，cricket and table tennis to name but a few for the children to enjoy．
WEEK 5：Having a Ball （Monday 19th August to Friday 23rd August）
Quizzes，arts and crafts，fun in the gym and swims in the pool are not to be missed within this week of fun．
WEEK 6：Medal Medley（混战）（Tuesday 27th August to Friday 30th August）
This week re-runs the best bits of the last five weeks with great team games and tournaments，action-packed ball sports，floaty fun in the pool and adventures in the woods．
Children will need to bring：
Swimming kit，plenty to drink and break snacks．Dependant on the weather，children will need either sunscreen and sun hats or wet weather gear．
36．What can we learn from the first paragraph？D
A．Children will gradually adapt to the cold weather in the activities．
B．Children will form a good mood naturally in Port Regis School．
C．Children will explore nature to tally on their own in the secure environment of Port Regis．
D．Children will become comfortable with each other through team building activities．
37．Which activity Mill be unique？D
| A．Make a Racquet． | B．Sporting madness． |
| C．Festival of sport． | D．Let's go wild． |
A．children may experience the feeling of failure
B．all the games may be played indoors
C．children may get warned for failing in games
D．children may swim in the river in the wild
39．when can children review the activities they had before？C
A.29th July to 2nd August．
B．Thursday 27th July to Friday 30th Angust．
C．Tuesday 27th August to Friday 30th August．
D．Monday 19th August to Friday 23rd August．
40．What information can we learn from the passage？C
A．Children will be provicted with snacks to eat．
B．Children must wear sunscreen or sunhats．
C．Children reed to prepare for rainy day，
D．Children have to drink a lot for swimming．