题目内容
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
在一个人的成长过程中,总会有许多事发生。请写一件在你的成长过程中对你的成长有帮助的一件事。
As we grow up, there are many things happening to us, which have great impact on our future in life.
When I was in the middle school, I didn’t do well in my English. It was my English teacher who instrusted me in English study. Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to my teacher. He has taken good care of my studies since I came to this school..When in trouble, I often turned to him for help .He always encouraged me and gived me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. He cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English.
With the assistance of my teacher, I've made great progress in English. I'm so thankful for his love that I'll work harder and wish to be an English teacher in the future.
解析试题分析:考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】As we grow up, there are many things happening to us, which have great impact on our future in life.这句话用了非限制性定语从句, It was my English teacher who instrusted me in English study.这句话用了强调句, Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to my teacher.这句话用了高级词汇fail, When in trouble, I often turned to him for help . 这句话用了省略句, With the assistance of my teacher, I've made great progress in English. I'm so thankful for his love that I'll work harder and wish to be an English teacher in the future.这句话用了so…that…句型。
考点:考查开放式作文
2013年高考在即,高三学生目前正处在紧张复习迎考的氛围中。假如你叫李华,承德市某高中的高三学生,寒假之际,想和父母说说知心话,请你用英文在你的博客上给你父母写一封信。具体内容如下:
| 知心话 | |
| 感 恩 | 关切鼓励,倾注爱心 |
| 对父母的期望 | 1. 多加交流,使自己保持良好状态 |
| | 2. 创造条件,给自己提供适时帮助 |
| 寒假打算 | 考生自拟(至少写出三点) |
参考词汇: 高考 college entrance examination
Dear Mom and Dad,
Traditional Chinese Spring Festival is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a hearttoheart talk with you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua