Question

观察下面四幅图，以图中小女孩为第一人称，写一篇100词左右的日记。

注意：1.日记须包括所有图画的内容，可稍增加细节，使日记通顺连贯；

2.日记格式已写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：希望工程the Hope Project；零花钱pocket money

Tuesday, July 3rd Sunny

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Answer 1

One Possible Version

Tuesday, July 3rd Sunny

This morning our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class. She said, "Now in the countryside many children still can't go to school because of poverty. Can you help them?"

After school, I went home. When I entered my room, I saw the little box in which I kept my pocket money. Though I wanted to buy what I needed, I decided to give away my money to the children who are eager to go to school. I began to write a letter to them at once. Having finished writing it, I went to the post office and posted all my pocket money.

I feel very happy today because I've done a good deed

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇看图作文，要求以所给的四副图画为内容写一篇日记。根据提示的信息可知，文章应写成记叙文，内容包括：为什么要捐款、如何捐款和捐款后的感受三个方面。本文是对做过的事情的述，所以以一般过去时为主，用第一人称。写作时要充分发挥想象，适当的添加自己的观点，使文章内容丰满，并达到要求的字数。此外为了提高文章档次，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇，并添加关联词让行文流畅。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达使用了三段式结构，开门见山地点明捐款的原因。第二段描述了我捐款的过程。第三段描写了做好事后的心情。本文的亮点是运用了复杂的句式如定语从句，状语从句和现在分词等，提升了文章的档次；because of 、be eager to 、I feel very happy because...等结构的运用也为文章增添了亮色。

考点：考查看图作文