题目内容
假定你是米易中学高一学生李华,到校学习已经半学期了。现在请你根据以下写作要点和要求给你的父母写一封英文信,告知你的所见所闻、所感所悟。
写作要点:
1.学校简介:位于攀枝花南部;环境舒适
2.师资团队:教师耐心、严格;受学生欢迎
3.学科发展:想学理科/文科;并给出原因(自拟两条)文科 Liberal arts理科 Science
4.询问父母近况
要求:
1.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。2.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。
3.书写须清晰、工整。4.信件中不能出现本人真实信息。
Dear dad and mom,
It’s almost three months since I left you. How I miss you!
Now,
Dear dad and mom,
It’s almost three months since I left you. How I miss you! Now, I want to tell you what I have seen and how I'm feeling at Miyi Senior High.
Miyi Senior High , which lies in the south of PanZhiHua City. Its environment is pretty quiet and beautiful, and first-class facilities afford us a good chance to work hard. I'm very satisfied with the teachers as well. As far as I know, not only are they patient with the students, but also strict in studies. They are well received by(are popular with) the students.
As for my studies, I'd like to choose science subjects. On one hand, I'm interested in science and have made great progress. On the other hand, science subjects challenge my potentials and I will have a promising future.
How is everything with you these days? I hope that you are not too tired and do care about yourself.
I’m looking forward to receiving your early reply.
解析试题分析:考查提纲式作文:这篇作文的提纲很详细,关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要根据所给要点,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文结构明确,思路清晰。把内容要点都涵盖了。同时注意应用较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如be satisfied with 对…满意,be well received by(are popular with)受…欢迎,As for 至于,make great progress做出很大的进步,care about关心,It’s almost three months since I left you. 这句话用了固定句型,Now, I want to tell you what I have seen and how I'm feeling at Miyi Senior High.这句话用了宾语从句, Miyi Senior High , which lies in the south of PanZhiHua City. 这句话用了定语从句, As far as I know, not only are they patient with the students, but also strict in studies. 这句话用了倒装句,还有范文使用了 On one hand, On the other hand,这样的关联词,使文章更加连贯。
考点:考查提纲类书面表达
你所在的研究性学习小组对“中学生的健康状况”进行了一次调查,主要调查结果如下:
| 现状 | 身体素质逐年下降,肥胖人数增多 |
| 原因 | 学习紧张,体育锻炼少,较少参加家务等体力劳动,饮食不均衡 |
| 专家建议 | 少上网聊天,保证睡眠每天运动一小时,多吃蔬菜水果,不吃垃圾食品 |
请根据以上信息写一篇英语短文,在英文校报上投稿。内容包括:中学生的健康现状、原因及专家建议。
【写作要求】
注意:1.词数:100左右.
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Last week,we made a survey about middle school students' health condition.
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假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。请根据下列提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括:
| 部分同学的饮食习惯 | 良好的饮食习惯 | 个人看法 |
| 不吃早餐 爱吃零食 偏食 饮食过量 | 饮食多样化 饮食定时适量 | 重要性:有助于身体健康…… |
发言稿必须包括表格中所有内容要点,可适当发挥;
发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
词数:120左右;
参考词汇:偏食 be particular about food 零食 snack适量 proper amounts of
Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.
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That’s all. Thank you!