题目内容
“目标”在人们成长的路上发挥着重要的作用,在高二尤为重要。请你结合自身实际,按以下提示,准备一篇英语发言稿,在英语课上与同学们作交流。
1. 目标的重要性;
2. 如何设立目标;
3. 谈谈你的近期目标;
4. 如何实现你的目标。
注意:1. 词数150左右,开头语已为你写好;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear classmates,
It's a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I'd like to share my thought about goals with you.
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Wish you to realize your dreams.
That's all.Thank you!
Dear classmates,
It's a great honor to have a chance to speak here.Today I'd like to share my thought about goals with you.
There is no denying that goals are important especially for senior students because they act as maps guiding you to where you are heading for.With a clear direction, you will directly get what you want.
In my view, goals are not difficult to set. First, you should make clear what you really want. What's more, it's essential to make detailed plans which can be carried out step by step. My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.
To achieve this, not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared, but also I will keep a positive attitude towards ups and downs in life.
Wish you to realize your dreams.
That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求以“目标”为侧重点并结合自身的实际情况写一篇发言稿。写作要点已经给出,主要从目标的重要性、如何设立目标、你的近期目标、如何实现目标这几个方面入手,写作时注意行文的连贯性;不能出现拼写和标点错误;尽量使用学过的定语从句、名词性从句、非谓语动词、特殊句式等语法知识和高级词汇,来增加作文的亮点。
亮点说明:范文主要分为三段,第一段写目标的重要性,第二段写设立目标和自己的近期目标,第三段写如何实现目标。
范文使用了固定句型There is no denying that goals are important especially for senior students;原因状语从句because they act as maps guiding you to...;宾语从句where you are heading for,what you want,what you really want;定语从句which can be carried out step by step;目的状语从句so that I can step into an ideal university;倒装not only will I spare no effort等重难点语法知识,英语知识掌握得很扎实;
范文注意使用In my view, First, What's more, To achieve this等词和短语来衔接前后句和上下文,使作文衔接紧凑,条理清晰;
范文还使用了directly;essential;step into;fulfill;positive;act as;head for;step by step;not only..., but also...;spare no effort;make full use of;keep a positive attitude towards;ups and downs等高级词汇和固定短语,使作文的内容得到了充实。
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