Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校来自英国的交换生Peter，回国后发邮件对你的帮助表示感谢，并询问了你的学习情况，尤其是对你市业已开始的垃圾分类处理问题表示关注。请你给他回复邮件介绍相关情况。

注意：

1.词数：100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am more than happy to know that you have returned safe and sound. You owe your progress in Chinese to my help. To tell you the truth, I also appreciate your help in my English. Now I am getting along well with my subjects, especially English.

As for our environment, it used to leave much to be desired, but now the whole city have promoted the awareness of environment protection. All the citizens are willing to separate and sort rubbish. All the rubbish is properly treated. Last week our school held a show — Art works out of Rubbish.

Now I can’t wait for you to come again to our city, a cleaner one than ever.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是一封书信。假定你是李华，请你给英国的交换生Peter回复邮件介绍你的学习情况以及你的城市业已开始的垃圾分类处理问题的相关情况。

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.介绍你的学习情况；2.你的城市业已开始的垃圾分类处理问题的相关情况。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：more than happy， return safe and sound，owe your progress to my help，to tell you the truth，get along well with my subjects，as for our environment，used to，promote the awareness of environment

protection，be willing to separate and sort rubbish，a cleaner one than ever。

可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。

通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。