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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

刪除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Time spent in a bookshop can be most enjoyable. Here is a moving story about it. Once there was a medical student wanted to read a textbook which was far too expensive to buy it. The only copy he could find was in a bookshop, but he couldn’t afford it. So that he could do was to read it in the shop. Every afternoon, he goes to the shop and read some of the books at a time. One day, however, he found the book missed from its usual place. So disappointed, he was about to leave when he noticed an owner of the shop signaling to him. To their surprise, the owner pointed to the book, which was good put away in a comer. And he added that he put it there for case anyone else attempted to buy it.

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【解析】小题1 考查定语从句和非谓语动词。句意：曾经有一个医学院的学生想读一本买不起的教科书。student做先行词，在定语从句中做主语。本句谓语动词was，又出现一个动词想要，可以看作非谓语动词，学生和想是主动关系，故student后加who或wanted改为wanting。

小题2 考查代词。句意：有一个医学院的学生想读一本他买不起的教科书。textbook做先行词，在定语从句中做宾语。用which引导做宾语，句中代词是多余的，故去掉it。

小题3 考查关系词。句意：所以他能做的就是在书店读这本书。was前是主语从句，do后面缺少宾语用what引导。故that改为what。

小题4 考查动词时态。句意：每天下午，他都会到书店读几页那本书，根据Once there was得知这里在讲述以前发生的故事，用一般过去时。故goes改为went。

小题5 考查名词单复数。句意：每天下午，他都会到书店读几页那本书，根据The only copy he could find was in a bookshop, but he couldn’t afford it.得知他是看一本书。故books改为book。

小题6 考查非谓语动词。句意：然而有一天他发现在原来的位置找不到那本书了。miss当遗失讲时是不及物动词，find+宾语+宾补中，miss要用现在分词，故missed改为missing。

小题7 考查冠词。句意：他正要失望地离去这时店主叫住他。店主是特指书店的主人，用定冠词，故an改为the。

小题8 考查代词。句意：让他惊讶的是，店主向他指指那本角落放着的书，这个故事是关于那个学生的，所以他惊讶。故their改为his。

小题9 考查副词。句意：那本书被好好地放在了角落，副词修饰动词。故good改为well。

小题10 考查介词。句意：店主说他把书放在角落以防其他人想要买走它，以防万一in case。故for改为in。