Question

假设你是李华，明年即将进入大学学习，但是不知道怎么样适应大学的生活。请你就以下大学新生常遇到的情况给北京大学校长写一封信，寻求建议。
1. 在生活中不会照顾自己；
2. 感到孤独，经常想家；
3. 钱物容易丢失
4. 对食物、气候不适应；
5. 校外租房现象。
注意：
1. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2. 150词左右。
Dear President,
Yours
Li Hua

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Dear President,
I’m a senior 3 student and I’m going to university next year. But I’m worried about the university life and I’m afraid I can’t adjust to the new environment. So I want to ask for some advice on how to adapt myself to the new life in a short time.
It’s said that most freshmen are confused by the sudden change of their environment and don’t know how to deal with it. They can’t take care of themselves and always feel lonely and homesick. What is more, they may sometimes lose their money, mobile phones and many other things. They even fall ill because of the new climate and food. In addition, some students who feel uneasy to live with others prefer to live out of campus.
As a pre-university student, I want to maintain a meaningful life in the university. Could you tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my university life more wonderful?
Thank you very much!
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。请你就以下大学新生常遇到的情况给北京大学校长写一封信，寻求关于如何适应大学生活的建议。要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【亮点说明】So I want to ask for some advice on how to adapt myself to the new life in a short time.这句话是疑问词+不定式做宾语， It’s said that most freshmen are confused by the sudden change of their environment and don’t know how to deal with it. 这句话是it做形式主语的句子， some students who feel uneasy to live with others prefer to live out of campus.这句话用了定语从句， Could you tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my university life more wonderful?这句话有过去分词做后置定语，还有范文里面还用了 What is more, In addition,这样的关联词，使文章更连贯。