Question

【题目】目前，学校存在少数考生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：

主要原因	考试偏多、偏难
	不用功、懒惰
	取悦父母、老师
个人看法	作弊不对，违反校规
	……（其他看法）

注意：

1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

2. 词数：100左右；

3. 参考词汇：作弊 cheat (v.)

Answer 1

【答案】My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations, which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of the students are too lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons or studies. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please both parents and teachers. In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest to try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

【解析】试题分析：题目要求根据提示用英语写一篇征文稿，谈一谈对考试作弊的看法。写作要点包括：作弊的主要原因；个人的看法这两三个方面。词数在100词左右，作文必须包含所有内容要点；注意使用参考词汇；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了主语从句、定语从句、原因状语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：主语从句It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.；定语从句which are too difficult for us；固定句型it is wrong to cheat in examinations；原因状语从句because it breaks the rules of schools等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用as students, but, on the other hand, so, sometimes, in my opinion, what’s more等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了work hard at, in order to, both...and, try to, instead of, get well prepared for等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。