Question

11．The suitable clothes can make men handsome and make women attractive，so more and more people spend much money on clothes．
Thanks to the fashion designers，many different styles of clothes appear every day．If you go to a big store or walk on the street，you'll find many fashionable clothes easily．
Of course everyone has his or her own way of dressing．Perhaps the most popular clothes are casual ones．They're made of cotton and there are many types of designs．They feel comfortable，so men and women as well as the young and the old enjoy wearing them．Some casual clothes don't need dry-cleaning，so they can save us money．
Not everyone can wear casual clothes at any time and any place．Some people have to wear uniforms when they're at work such as police officers，soldiers，firefighters and pilots．Uniforms can not only protect them but also show good discipline．
It doesn't matter what kinds of clothes you wear．It's important for everyone to dress neatly and suitable （合适地）．
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点．
2．以约120个词就我们现实生活中衣着的话题谈你的想法，内容包括：
（1）你个人对待衣着重要性的理解；
（2）举例说明你对衣服潮流（fashion）的看法；
（3）你怎样看待身边部分同学对名牌服装的追求．
【写作要求】
1．可以使用实例来支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯．

Answer 1

分析 写作主题：我们现实生活中衣着
写作要点：1．以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点．
2．以约120个词就我们现实生活中衣着的话题谈你的想法，内容包括：
（1）你个人对待衣着重要性的理解；
（2）举例说明你对衣服潮流（fashion）的看法；
（3）你怎样看待身边部分同学对名牌服装的追求．

解答 This passage tells us that though people dress differently in everyday life，what matters most is that we should dress neatly and properly instead of caring too much about the quality and fashion．
Personally speaking，I totally agree with the writer．It is obvious that we should not dress too casually．It is necessary for every one of us to dress properly on different occasions．In schools，students are often required to wear school uniforms，but when they are out of school，they should not care too much about what to wear．I have friends who only buy and wear clothes of famous brands and never think about their high prices．Some young people are always trying to keep up with the fashion and also care too much about their dressing．I think it is not worthwhile．
In a word，as students in schools，it is always important that we dress neatly and properly every day．We should also remember to pay more attention to our studies．

点评 考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．