题目内容
15.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Yesterday,I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school.I was about to help her up while a passer-by stop me,saying that I might be accused of knocking her down.Heard his words,I began to hesitate and slow down my steps.At the moment,another student,that saw everything,went up to help.The old lady said nothing but lots of thank to the good boy.I felt ashamed.
As is known to all,help others is forever a good virtue.Even though some old people behave improper,we can't let it to disappear.I have made my mind that I will reach out my hand without hesitation next time.
分析 作者讲述了在上学路上遇见一位老人摔倒了,想去帮她起来却又怕被讹,犹豫之时另外一位学生上前把老人扶起来,老人非常感激.对此作者感触很深:助人为乐永远都是优良传统,尽管有些老人变得不道德,但是这个传统却不能丢失.
解答 Yesterday,I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school.I was about to help her up while a passer-by stop me,saying that I might be accused of knocking her down.Heard his words,I began to hesitate and slow down my steps.At the moment,another student,that saw everything,went up to help.The old lady said nothing but lots of thank to the good boy.I felt ashamed.
As is known to all,help others is forever a good virtue.Even though some old people behave improper,we can't let it to disappear.I have made∧my mind that I will reach out my hand without hesitation next time.
详解:
1.the改为an;考查冠词,"一个老太太",泛指应用不定冠词,元音音素前用an.
2.while改为when;考查固定用法,when suddenly是固定用法,表示一件事在进行中突然发生了另外一件意外的事.
3.stop改为stopped;考查动词的时态,此处叙述过去的事情,应用一般过去时.
4.heard改为hearing;考查分词作状语,hear与句子主语I之间为主动关系,应用现在分词形式作状语.
6.thank改为thanks;考查名词,thank是可数名词,通常用复数形式thanks.
7.help改为helping;考查非谓语动词,这里用动名词短语做句子的主语.
8.improper改为improperly;考查副词,此处用副词作状语修饰动词behave.
9.去掉to;考查动词不定式,let 后面跟省to不定式.
10.made后面加up;考查固定短语,make up one's mind 是固定短语,意为"下决心,决定"
点评 短文改错题首先要整体理解短文意思,抓住中心思想,结合语境和上下文关系,充分运用平时掌握的固定搭配,习惯用法,句型结构等等来发现文章的错误之处,加以修正.
| A. | was trying | B. | tried | C. | had tried | D. | has tried |
The girl smiled at me as I sat down.She was named Kathy.She had been in a car accident and now was on her way for (38)D.
When the snack and juice arrived,it did not take me long to(39)C that Kathy would not be able to (40)B herself.I considered (41)A to feed her but hesitated,as it seemed too (42)B to offer a service to a complete(43)D.But then I realized that Kathy's need was more (44)C than my discomfort.I offered to help her eat,and although she was uncomfortable to accept at first,she did as I expected.
We became closer and closer in a short period of time.By the end of the five-hour trip,my heart (45)A,and the(46)C was really better spent than if I had just sat by myself.
I was very glad I had sat next to Kathy and fed her.Love and care sometimes flow beyond human borders and remove the fears that keep us (47)D.When we offer to serve a stranger,we grow to live in a more rewarding world.(287words)
| 36.A.losing | B.changing | C.taking | D.buying |
| 37.A.decided | B.wanted | C.regretted | D.promised |
| 38.A.business | B.travel | C.pleasure | D.treatment |
| 39.A.remember | B.say | C.realize | D.recognize |
| 40.A.eat | B.feed | C.choose | D.support |
| 41.A.offering | B.needing | C.stopping | D.trying |
| 42.A.far | B.impolite | C.close | D.fast |
| 43.A.girl | B.neighbor | C.passenger | D.stranger |
| 44.A.unusual | B.direct | C.important | D.shameful |
| 45.A.had warmed | B.had jumped | C.had broken | D.had cheered |
| 46.A.life | B.money | C.time | D.energy |
| 47.A.upset | B.independent | C.silent | D.separate |
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| A. | possible | B. | likely | C. | able | D. | about |