Question

假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题。
2.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。
注意：1.词数：120词左右；
2. 演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，该部分不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone,!
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Thank you!

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.  The topic of my speech today is “Let's Ride Bicycles”. As we know, air pollution and heavy traffic are becoming increasingly severe due to the overuse of cars. Therefore, it’s high time we chose another means of transport－cycling.
Compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and we don't have all the added costs of fuel and parking. What's more, bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars and cycling is a good way of energy-saving and low-carbon life. Last but not least, cycling is can help keep fit and live longer. By riding bicycles, you can cut down your risk of heart attacks, high blood pressure and other illnesses. So, let's ride bicycles from today on!
Thank you

解析试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写一篇题为Let’s Ride Bicycles的演讲稿。根据提示的要点，文章可以一段写目前汽车造成的问题，一段写骑自行车的好处，这样的段落安排会使文章结构清晰。此外要点中列举骑自行车的好处较多，所以在写这部分时要注意使用表顺序的连接词，以使文章有条理性。另外，在语言的运用上可以适当使用祈使句，这样使演讲稿更具有号召性。
【亮点说明】本篇范文语言简练流畅，结构紧凑，要点全面。As we know, air pollution and heavy traffic are becoming increasingly severe due to the overuse of cars.这句话用了非限制性定语从句 Therefore, it’s high time we chose another means of transport－cycling.这句话用了虚拟语气，Compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and we don't have all the added costs of fuel and parking. 这句话用了过去分词做状语，此外，文中Last but not least,,和 What’s more,的使用使文章内容条理分明，层次清晰。
考点：考查提纲作文。