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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加﹑删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, mom and I went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. While we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. There were so many of them that it spent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. Finally, under the help of the shop assistant, we selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. Immediately, we returned back home to show it to my grandpa. Seeing it, he was very happy and couldn’t wait to put it on. But we were annoying to find something was wrong with the zipper. Hurriedly, I took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem. To my satisfactions, she is very kind and helped me choose another one patiently. Stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smiling contently. How delighted I was! 


【小题1】While -- When
【小题2】vary改成various
【小题3】spent改成took
【小题4】under改成with
【小题5】去掉back
【小题6】annoying改成annoyed
【小题7】explained后面加to
【小题8】satisfactions—satisfaction
【小题9】is改成was
【小题10】stand改成standing

解析试题分析:文章介绍上周六和妈妈一起上街给爷爷买鸭绒衣的事情,虽然有点小插曲,但是结果令人满意。
【小题1】当我们到达商店的时候,我们看见看见各种各样的鸭绒衣。While引导时间状语从句,表示一段时间,When引导时间状语从句,表示时间点。
【小题2】vary是动词“不同”,这里修饰colours用形容词various“各种各样的”vary改成various
【小题3】spent的搭配是“spend time (in) doing”, took才是用take sb time to do sth “花时间做”spent改成took
【小题4】在…的帮助下,with the help of,under改成with under改成with
【小题5】return="go" back“回来”, back是多余的去掉back
【小题6】句意:我们发现拉链坏了很生气。Annoying一般修饰物,改成annoyed修饰人annoying改成annoyed
【小题7】explained后面加to,因为“向某人解释”是expain to sb sth, explained后面加to
【小题8】使我们满意的是:to one’s satisfaction这里是“使某人满意的是”
【小题9】这个故事是发生在上个星期六,所以是过去时:is改成was is改成was
【小题10】句意:站在镜子前面,爷爷看着自己穿着新衣服,满意的笑了。stand改成standing是现在分词做状语。stand改成standing
考点:考查短文改错

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