Question

假设你是李华，最近，你的外数Martin Mellish给你发Email询问你校课外活动（after-class activities）的开展情况。请你根据以下提示，写一封回信。
1、学校开展课外活动的情况：20多个社团、30多门选修课；
2、你参加的课外活动以及你体会到的益处（两点益处）；
3、为同学选择课外活动提出建议（两条建议）。
注意： 1. 词数100-120词左右；
2. 回信的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
3. 参考词汇：选修课 elective,社团club
Dear Martin,                         
I am glad to hear from you. In your email, _______________________________________
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Martin,
I am glad to hear from you. In your email you asked me about the after-school activities in our school and here I would like to introduce to you something about it.
There are over 20 students’clubs and more than 30 electives in our school. I am in the basketball and chess clubs.The activities not only build up my body and mind but also provide a perfect platform and rich choices for my future development. Besides, they also free me from the heavy work of study,guaranteeing my sustainable development.
Here is my suggestion to the students on how to choose after-class activities: You’d better choose those which interest and suit you. What’s more, you have to balance your study and activities so as to achieve both.
You are warmly welcome to come and experience our after-school activities.
Best wishes!
Sincerely yours，
L i Hua

解析试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文。假设你是李华，最近，你的外数Martin Mellish给你发Email询问你校课外活动（after-class activities）的开展情况。请你根据以下提示，写一封回信。要用一般现在时来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可，尤其注意一定要写出自己的看法。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。注意要求的词数100-120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。
考点：书信类作文
【亮点说明】hear from这个短语的准确应用；I would like to do sth.这个句型的使用；not only ，but also这个句型的使用；Here is my suggestion to the students on how to choose after-class activities这里含有一个宾语从句；You’d better choose those which interest and suit you.这里含有一个定语从句。
考点：书信类书面表达