题目内容
2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I have a good friend calls Tony．He is our monitor and he as well as some other classmates in our class is outstanding．Though he is a cleverer boy，he works very hard．Have much in common，we have a lot to talk about．One evening he told me what something happening when his parents were out．He was doing his homework one Sunday morning while he smelt something burning．He stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out o his neighbor's house．He called 119immediately．Ten minutes late，the firemen came and put off the fire．Her neighbor was very thankful for his help．
分析 本文主要讲述作者的朋友Tony是个聪明的男孩，学习努力．一次，他正在做作业时，闻到某个东西的糊味．停下作业向窗外看，发现邻居家的房子冒烟了，拨打了119，很快，消防员来了，扑灭了火．邻居对此很是感谢．
解答 I have a good friend calls Tony．He is our monitor and he as well as some other classmates in our class is outstanding．Though he is a cleverer boy，he works very hard．Have much in common，we have a lot to talk about．One evening he told me what something happening when his parents were out．He was doing his homework one Sunday morning while he smelt something burning．He stopped∧look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of his neighbor's house．He called 119immediately．Ten minutes late，the firemen came and put off the fire．Her neighbor was very thankful for his help．
详解：
1．calls改为called 考查过去分词．Tony与call之间为动宾关系，用过去分词短语called Tony作定语修饰friend．
2．cleverer改为clever 考查形容词．根据句意：虽然他很聪明，但他学习很努力．在此句中没有用到两者比较，不用比较级．
3．Have改为Having 考查现在分词．主语we与have为主动关系，用现在分词作状语．
4．去掉what 考查连词．根据句意：一天晚上他告诉我在他父母出去后发生的事情．tell sb．sth．告诉某人某事．what引导宾语从句，将what去掉．
5．while改为when 考查固定句型．was/were doing sth．when-did sth．意为"正在做某事．这时突然…"，是固定搭配．
6．加to 考查动词不定式．stop to do sth．意为"停下来（手中的工作）去做另外的事情"．
7．find改为found 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
8．late改为later 考查副词．later用于一段具体时间之后，表示从过去或将来算起的多长时间以后，但通常不指从现在算起的多久以后．
9．off改为out 考查词语用法．根据句意：十分钟后，消防员赶来了并扑灭了火．put off推迟；put out扑灭．将off改为out．
10．Her改为His 考查代词．根据句意：他的邻居非常感谢他的帮助．又根据文中"he is a clever boy"他是一个聪明的男孩．将代词her改为his．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
