题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Chris在电视里看到中国春运,发邮件向你询问有关情况。请你回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1.原因及时间;
2. 30多亿人次流动;
3.交通方式。
注意:1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:春运Spring Festival travel season
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【答案】Dear Chris,
Traditionally, getting together is very important for Chinese families, especially when the Spring Festival is coming. Undoubtedly, people living in or outside their hometown, home or abroad, will eagerly hurry home before the day at all costs, and flood to the workplace or school after that, for which Spring Festival travel season comes into sight spectacularly.
The Spring Festival travel season lasts for over one month. During the season, what impresses you most is its huge scale. In every corner of China more than 3 billion passengers pour in or pour out by train, by airplane, by bus or by car. For public transportation, people can reserve tickets online efficiently and effectively.
All in all, if you need to know more, just cope to China to experience it personally.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Chris在电视里看到中国春运,发邮件向你询问有关情况。请你回复一封邮件,内容包括:1. 原因及时间;2. 30多亿人次流动;3. 交通方式。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):getting together (团聚);Spring Festival travel season(春运);Undoubtedly (确实地);home or abroad (海内外);spectacularly(壮观地)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。