Question

Recently divorced in my 30s, I had no job and was on my way downtown on a rainy day to go to the employment offices. I had no umbrella, for my old one had fallen apart, and I couldn’t afford another one.
I sat down in the streetcar--- there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle inlaid (镶嵌着…的) with gold and bright enamel (珐琅). I had never seen anything so lovely. I examined the handle and saw a name on it. The usual procedure would have been to turn in the umbrella to the conductor, but I decided to take it and find the owner myself.
I got off the streetcar in a downpour and carefully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name on the umbrella and found it. I called and a lady answered. Yes, she said in surprise that was her umbrella, which her parents, now dead, had given her as a birthday present, but it’d been stolen from her locker at school years before.
She was so excited that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her house. She took the umbrella, her eyes filled with tears. I was only too happy to see her get back the lost umbrella, and get a job she offered me.
写作要求
以30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容。

Answer 1

one possible version
The author happened to pick up an umbrella on a bus and tried to find its owner. She was pleased to find the owner and also got a job offered by the owner of the umbrella.

试题分析：这是阅读短文，概括文章的主要内容。首先要读懂原文内容，把握文章的大意，然后按要求写文章。用30个词概括短文的要点，注意写作时不要照抄原文中的句子，需要注意紧扣文章主题，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的原文。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
点评：本文属于任务类作文，它根据读写任务的评分标准看学生能否做到三个是否:一是标题是否准确。二是梗概是否包括了全部主要信息,句子使用是否正确。三是读后任务:①在内容上是否弄清文章的体裁;②所运用的句子在词汇上、句子结构、语法等方面是否正确;③句子与句子、段与段是否合理连接等,要求都比较严格。那么如何使学生能写出好文章呢?要想学生能更好在写作中运用综合能力,应该把写作建立在听、说、读的基础上,通过多写多练来培养。