写作 Teenagers杂志Conversation With Brad栏目的负责人Brad收到了李华的一封来信.仔细阅读下面的来信.帮助Brad用英语写一封回信.给出分析并提出合理建议. Dear Brad, I'm a student from Xinhua Senior High School．I have some difficulty communicating 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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Teenagers杂志Conversation With Brad栏目的负责人Brad收到了李华的一封来信。仔细阅读下面的来信，帮助Brad用英语写一封回信，给出分析并提出合理建议。

Dear Brad,

I'm a student from Xinhua Senior High School．I have some difficulty communicating with my parents．Although I have tried my best, I find it really difficult to make them satisfied……So I feel lonely sometimes．I would be grateful if you could give me some advice．

Yours,

Li Hua

注意：1．可适当增加细节。

2．词数：120－150。

Dear Li Hua,

　　I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs．

　　_______________________

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解析：

　　One possible version：

　　Dear Li Hua,

　　I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs．

　　I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents．Almost everybody has it or had it when they were in their adolescence．Therefore, it's a common problem shared by many, whose cause lies in what we call “generation gap”．

　　As for my advice for you, first, don't hide your feelings．You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents．Second, convince them you have tried your best．It is not their fault to place high expectations on their child．I believe they will be satisfied with you as long as they know you have tried whatever you can to live up to their standard．

　　Anyway, there is no one who love you more than your parents in the world．Whatever you are, they will always be there for you．Love them, and love can heal everything．

Yours sincerely,

Brad

　　评分原则

　　1．本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。

　　2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次。判断文章档次时，要注意要点，更要注意按照词汇及语法结构运用及表达方法总体评价文章。

　　3．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

　　4．语法结构和词汇方面的错误主要指以下几种：主谓不一致，动词形式(句子时态和语态)不对，词组搭配不当、句子结构错误、词序不当、关键词用错。

　　5．如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

　　6．词数少于120和多于150的，从总分中减去2分。

　　各档次的给分范围和要求

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