Question

一年一度的校园文化节又拉开了序幕，但今年学生却没有表现出像往年的兴趣和热情面对这一现象，有人提出校园文化节还要不要举办的问题，这引起了同学们的讨论。上周末你班也进行了一场讨论。大多数同学都支持校园文化节，请你根据下面所提供的内容将讨论结果做一总结，字数100左右。

支持的原因：1. 给学生创造了展示自我才华的舞台；

2. 有利于提高学习兴趣；

3.丰富校园文化，活跃校园气氛。

注意：1. 行文连贯，内容完整；

2. 题目和开头语已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 总词数100左右。

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The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again, but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before.__________________________________

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Answer 1

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One possible version：

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  The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again , but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before .Many students believe that campus cultural festival can offer a wonderful stage for students to show their talents.Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, a series of activities also enrich the campus culture and make campus atmosphere more active.

  In addition , more students will be motivated to develop their potential abilities which will make them qualified for their future positions .On the other hand , students will find it a good chance to relax themselves as well as gain much knowledge that can’t be found in the book.

【解析】

试题分析：此篇书面表达要求对校园文化节还要不要举办的讨论结果做出总结。在写作时同学们要注意先要说明讨论的事件，然后再讲述讨论结果。在讲述事件时可以用一般过去时态，而在发表个人见解时须采用一般现在时或者根据需要使用一般将来时态。此外在写作时注意不要遗漏要点，而且还要恰当选用连接词以使行文连贯，结构紧凑。

【亮点说明】文章要点全面，语言丰富。短文中高级词汇motivated，qualified，promote以及长句的使用显示了作者较高的语言运用能力，而且短语Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, In addition，On the other hand 等的恰当使用不仅使文章上下衔接紧凑，语句连贯，而且也避免了文章句式的单一，总之这是一篇不错的范文。

考点：考查提纲作文。