Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的美国朋友James由于不爱运动、吃垃圾食品上瘾等原因陷入了肥胖的困扰中，非常苦恼，请你通过电子邮件给他提一些建议和意见，帮助他减肥。

注意:

1.词数:100左右（开头和结尾已给出但不计入总词数）

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear James,

I have received your e-mail telling me that you are not interested in taking exercise and that you are addicted to eating junk food.Now you are worried about gaining weight. If you want to lose weight, what you should first do is find out why you are overweight

From your e-mail, it seems that there are two reasons: lack of exercise and an unbalanced diet. I have two suggestions. First, setaside time to exercise regularly. Only in this way can you keep slim. Second, eat more healthy food and stay away from junk food.There are stores that specialize in healthy food, which is a lile more expensive but can make a big difference.

I hope my suggestions are helpful. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；你的美国朋友James由于不爱运动、吃垃圾食品上瘾等原因陷入了肥胖的困扰中，非常苦恼，请你通过电子邮件给他提一些建议和意见，帮助他减肥。

第2步：根据写作要求及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第3步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I have received your e-mail telling me that you are not interested in taking exercise and that you are addicted to eating junk food.；倒装的运用Only in this way can you keep slim.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。