假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10初语言错误,每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:

       删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。

       增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

       修改:在错的词下划—横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

       注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

          2.至允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well.

Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


C
People think being an artist must be a wonderful way to earn one's living. Of course, there are lots of great things about working for oneself, at home alone. What I really like is that nobody tells me what time to start in the morning, what to wear; or whether I can take the afternoon off and go to a football match.
But then, I have no one to chat with when I'm bored, no one to discuss last night's match with during the lunch-hour. Sure, I can spend the afternoon doing something I enjoy like swimming, walking the dog, or even sleeping, if I choose. But the work will still be there when I do finally get back home, and it's still got to be finished in time. Unfortunately, working at home means that people can always find me, whether I’m bored or not and once I’ve answered the doorbell, it's too late——my thoughts have been interrupted. No one would dream of calling if I worked in an office, but in an office I find myself making cups of coffee and listening to friends' troubles. As they talk, my ideas disappear and I feel increasingly stressed thinking of my work waiting to be done.
66. What is the writer trying to do in the text?
A. To encourage readers to work at home.     
B. To explain why he has changed his job.
C. To describe his working life.             
D. To say how he would like to work.
67. What can the reader learn from the text?
A. How to start working for oneself.         
B. What it's like to work at home.
C. Why the writer decided to work for himself. 
D. How artists become successful?
68. What does the writer like about his life?
A. He has plenty of opportunities for sport.    
B. He is his own boss.
C. He can see people when he wants to.       
D. He has a comfortable place to work.
69. What does the writer imagine he might do with colleagues ( 同事 ) ?
A. Have meals in restaurants.                
B. Go to the swimming pool.
C. Spend time in the countryside.                 
D. Talk about sport.
70. Which of these notices would be most useful for the writer to put on his door?

Recently, an Internet game has become a new fashion among young office workers and students. People can “farm” on a piece of “land” and “grow”, “sell” or even “steal” “vegetables”, “flowers” and “fruits” on the Net. They earn some e-money and buy more “seeds”, “pets” and even “houses”.
Joyce interviewed some young people. Here are their opinions.
Harold: I don’t quite understand why they are so mad about the childish game. Maybe they are just not confident enough to face the real world.
Allan: I enjoy putting some “bugs” (小虫子) in my friends’’ gardens and we’ve become closer because of the game. Having fun together is the most exciting thing about it.
Laura: You know, people in the city are longing for the life in the countryside. It reduces my work pressure in the office; besides, it gives me the exciting feeling of being a “thief”.
Ivy: Well, it’s just a waste of time. Teenagers playing the game spend so many hours on it that they cannot pay more attention to their study.
【小题1】By playing the game, people can ______.

A.make a lot of moneyB.make many friends
C.have great funD.better their life
【小题2】 The people “steal” someone else’s “vegetables” to ______.
A.live a more comfortable life
B.show their confidence in the reality
C.earn e-money to develop their own "farm"
D.enjoy the feelings of being children
【小题3】 Among the people interviewed, ______ doesn’t like the game at all.
A.LauraB.HaroldC.JoyceD.Allan
【小题4】 What can you learn about Laura from the passage?
A.She is a college student.B.She lives in a village.
C.She is an office worker.D.She wants to be a thief.

I really love my job because I enjoy working with small children and like the challenges and awards from the job. I also think my work is important. There was a time when I thought I would never have that sort of   36  .

I wasn’t an excellent student because I didn’t do much schoolwork. In my final term I started thinking   37  I might do and found I didn’t have much to  38  . I just accepted that I wasn’t the type to have a career. I then found myself a job, looking after two little girls. It wasn’t too bad at first, but the  39 began when I agreed to   40 , so that I would be there if my 41 had to go out for business in the evening. We  42  that if I had to work extra hours one week, she’d give me off the next. But  43  , it didn’t often work out. I was getting extremely   44and fed up, because I had too many 45  nights and early mornings with the children.

  46   Sunday, I was in the park with the children, and met Megan who used to go to school with me. I told her about my  47  . She suggested that I should take a (n)   48  and get a qualification if I wanted to work with children. I did not think I would be   49 because I didn’t take many exams in school. She    50 me to phone the local college and they were really helpful. My experience 51  for a lot and I got a part-time course. I had to   52  my job with the family, and got work helping out at a kindergarten. Now I’ve got a full-time job there, I shall always be   53 to Megan. I wish I had known   54  that you could have a career,   55  you aren’t top of the class at school.

1.

A.challenge

B.career

C.course

D.award

 

2.

A.when

B.how

C.what

D.why

 

3.

A.learn

B.teach

C.share

D.offer

 

4.

A.problems

B.questions

C.work

D.career

 

5.

A.stay up

B.play with

C.look after

D.live in

 

6.

A.friend

B.boss

C.classmate

D.parent

 

7.

A.agreed

B.thought

C.hoped

D.believed

 

8.

A.particularly

B.clearly

C.unfortunately

D.specially

 

9.

A.excited

B.tired

C.surprised

D.disappointed

 

10.

A.early

B.late

C.long

D.hard

 

11.

A.Another

B.That

C.This

D.One

 

12.

A.condition

B.work

C.children

D.situation

 

13.

A.course

B.exam

C.college

D.duty

 

14.

A.hired

B.recognized

C.accepted

D.known

 

15.

A.promised

B.persuaded

C.allowed

D.made

 

16.

A.explained

B.showed

C.counted

D.meant

 

17.

A.take

B.get

C.lay

D.leave

 

18.

A.warm

B.kind

C.thankful

D.friendly

 

19.

A.later

B.earlier

C.more

D.less

 

20.

A.even if

B.only if

C.since

D.as

 

 

第Ⅱ卷 (非选择题 共35分)

四.写作(共两节,满分35分)

第一节  短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误,请找出,并按下列情况改正:

此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意:请在答题卡上作答。

Dear Sir,

I am college student in Peking University.I’m                        76._______

quite interested in the position offering by your website                 77._______

for part-time English reporters.I think I’m fit the job.             78._______

As a student, I’ve read a lot and have many knowledge in                    79._______

different fields.I’m fond of English and do good in both              80._______

speaking and writing.Beside, I’m easy to get along                   81._______

with and I enjoy working together with another.Above                82._______

all, I once work as a reporter for my college broadcast                 83._______

station.So I’m sure I can do the job well if I will get                          84._______

the chance to work for the websites.I’m looking forward              85._______

to your reply.

                       Yours faithfully,

                          Li Hua

 

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