Question

【题目】假定你是红星中学的学生会主席李华，高考临近，你校决定举办高三毕业典礼(the Graduation Ceremony),请你代表学生会向全体高三学生发一则通知，内容包括：

1.毕业典礼时间 (7月4日)及地点(报告厅lecture hall);

2. 参加者：

3. 活动;

4. 注意事项。

注意：1、词数100左右：

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Notice

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The Student Union

Answer 1

【答案】Notice

We are going to have the Graduation Ceremony in the lecture hall on July 4 in order to welcome the coming college entrance examination and memorize the past three years. By then, some of us will read poems and some will tell stories. You can also hear wonderful singing and watch beautiful dancing there. We hope all the senior students can come and join in the activities. All the headmasters will be invited to our activities as representatives of teachers. Please get one performance ready because some of you will be asked to give us one.

The Student Union

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生一份关于举办高三学生毕业典礼的通知。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.毕业典礼时间 (7月4日)及地点(报告厅lecture hall);

2. 参加者：

3. 活动;

4. 注意事项。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

have the Graduation Ceremony；in the lecture hall；read poems；tell stories；hear wonderful singing；watch beautiful dancing；senior students；get one performance

第三步：连词成句

1. We are going to have the Graduation Ceremony in the lecture hall on July 4.

2. Some of us will read poems and some will tell stories.

3. You can also hear wonderful singing and watch beautiful dancing there.

4. We hope all the senior students can come and join in the activities.

5. Please get one performance ready because some of you will be asked to give us one.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改