Question

书面表达

请你根据下列表格的内容，阐述一下你对减少城市人口的看法，标题自拟.

Answer 1

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(1) 格式：看图表写文 (2) 人称：第三人称 (3) 时态：一般现在时，一般将来时 (4) 短语：first of all首先；so as to以便，为的是；birth rate出生率；have a tight control of严格控制……；in order to为了；more and more越来越多的；as well as和,以及；satellite towns卫星城；living blocks生活小区；carry out执行. (5) 要点 ①实行“晚婚”、“一对夫妇一个孩子”政策，减少人口出生率 ②严格控制外地人进城务工经商，减轻外地人口对城市的压力 ③在郊区建造生活、商业、文教、卫生、娱乐休闲生活小区，在城市的周围建造卫星城，吸引城市居民到郊区和卫星城工作和生活. (6) 草拟要点成英语 ① to practice the policy of “Late Marriage” and “One Couple, One Child”, to reduce the birth rate. ②to have a tight control of people entering cities to engage in trade or do various physical jobs, to reduce the pressure on the city. ③to build living blocks with shopping centers, schools, hospitals as well as cinemas and theatres or even satellite towns in the city suburbs or the countries round the cities, to encourage city citizens to more there. (7) 扩展要点成句 ①Practice the policy of “Late Marriage” and “One Couple, One child” so as to reduce the birth rate. ②The city government must have a tight control of people entering cities to engage in trade or do various physical jobs in order to reduce the pressure on the city. ③Living blocks with shopping centers, schools, hospitals as well as cinemas and theatres or even satellite towns should be built in the city suburbs or the countries round the cities. Citizens will be encouraged to more there. (8) 语言运用提示 first of all首先，secondly其二，finally最后，常用来表示列举；to，in order to，so as to都可以表目的，只是so as to表目的不可以置于句首；suggest表“建议”，其后的宾语从句要用虚拟语气，即“(should)＋动词原形”；caused by the increasing population是过去分词短语作后置定语修饰city；句子主语是谓语动词动作的承受者要用被动语态. (9) 组句谋篇成文 One possible version:     Our modern city is too crowded, and to solve the problem, I have three suggestions. Fist of all, practice the policy of “Late Marriage” and “One Couple, One child” so as to reduce the birth rate. Secondly, the city government must have a tight control of people entering cities to engage in trade or do various physical jobs in order to reduce the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population. Finally, more and more people suggest that living blocks with shopping centers, schools, hospitals as well as cinemas and theatres or even satellite towns should be built in the city suburbs or the countries round the cities. In this way city citizens will be encouraged to move there. If these three suggestions are well carried out, the city population will be greatly reduced.