Question

书面表达（满分15分）
假设你应邀参见学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”， 请你根据下表所提示的信息， 用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己学习英语的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

自己英语学习的情况	1. 英语学习的目的
	2. 英语学习的方法
	3. 课外自学的途径
	……
对学校英语教学的建议	（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议。）

注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of l earning English with you.                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.  1) I’m interested in English, and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well. 2)As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. 3) After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now, I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. 4) Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. 5) Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English contests and festivals.
Thank you for listening.

解析试题分析：考生如果想拿到高分，必须按照要求在作文中覆盖试题规定的所有内容要点，完成试题任务，达到预期的写作目的。在写作时，考生应该留心是否要点完整，是否有要点遗漏。在题示要点完整的前提下，考生可以以作文材料为中心进行适当地发挥，适当补充一部分，以期使作文更加完美。千万不要打破常规，追求所谓的标新立异，因为这样做，往往会适得其反，不但不能出色地完成书面表达的任务，而且最终拿不到自己心目中理想的作文分数。这里应该注意动词的时态及人称的变化。
考点：提纲作文。
点评：在写作时，考生应该尽可能地减少错误，避免出现汉字、拼音、空格等低级错误，尽量避开自己使用起来没有把握的单词和句子。如果为了追求句式的变化而出现了一些本来可以避免的错误，就得不偿失了。在保证准确的前提下，考生才可以考虑句式的变化，应用较多的语法结构。