Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Almost all of us heard the story "Here Comes the Wolf" when we are little kids.What we can learn from the story is we must be honest.Therefore, there're lots of case of dishonesty nowadays.

Being honest does great harm to other people or to yourself.Take the case of fake milk powder for an example. After drink this kind of milk,the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin,what badly affected their health.To my great relief,the producers got punishing so that more serious consequences could be avoided.

Answer 1

【答案】1.are 改为were

2.is后加that

3.Therefore改为However

4.case改为cases

5.honest改为dishonest

6.or改为and

7.去掉an

8.drink改为drinking

9.what改为which

10.punishing改为punished

【解析】【1】……when we are little kids.当我们是小孩子的时候，根据句意可判断应该是一般过去时，故应把are 改为were 。

【2】What we can learn from the story is we must be honest.that做连词引导表语从句的时候，that不可以省略，故应在is后加that。

【3】Therefore, there're lots of case of dishonesty nowadays.上一句话：“What we can learn from the story is we must be honest”从这个故事我们认识到我们必须诚实，与此句话：现如今存在很多不诚实的现象，形成转折，故应把Therefore改为However 。

【4】there're lots of case of dishonesty nowadays.case意为:情况，为可数名词，故应把case改为cases。

【5】Being honest does great harm to other people or to yourself，根据常识：应该是不诚实对别人和自己都有害，故应把honest改成dishonest。

【6】……does great harm to other people or to yourself，or意为：或者，含有选择的意思，常用在否定句中，而此句话other people和 yourself是并列的，故应把or改为and。

【7】Take the case of fake milk powder for an example.，固定搭配take……for example意为：拿……举例，故应去掉an 。

【8】 After drink this kind of milk,……介词after后应加动词ing形式，故应把drink改为drinking。

【9】the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin,what badly affected their health，which可用来引导限制性定语从句，what不能用于状语从句和定语从句，故应把what改为which。

【10】the producers got punishing so that more serious consequences could be avoided.固定搭配get+过去分词是一种被动形式，故应把punishing改为punished。