题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter在给你的信中提到他最近在准备期中考试,心理压力很大,内心很苦恼,希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.给对方安慰;
2.分析心理压力过大会导致的后果;
3.给出相应的建议及其理由。
注意:1.词数100个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to learn that
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter
I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately due to the coming mid-term exam. It’s common for teenagers to suffer stress in such a situation. But too much pressure may result in problems with sleep, appetite and memory. Here are my suggestions on how to deal with stress.
Firstly, take an active part in exercise. Exercise like walking or running can not only help you accumulate energy but also build up your confidence. Another way is to share your trouble with friends, which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是一篇应用文书信。写好此文,需注意三点:一是写信格式要准确,信的开头已经给出,但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当,本文内容包括:给对方安慰;分析心理压力过大会导致的后果;给出相应的建议及其理由。三要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】
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