Question

你的同学刘芳乐于助人（helpful），积极乐观（positive）。她在上星期日下午回校途中帮助了一位受伤的老人。请根据题示，用英语写一篇短文向英语报English Times投稿，简要叙述她做好事的经过，并谈谈你的感想。

What happened	an old man seriously hurt in the leg what Liu Fang did
Your opinion	misunderstanding or even trouble, or the right thing? …

注意：(1) 短文须包括上述全部要点，应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

(2) 词数：100左右。短文开头已给出（不计词数）。

Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently. _________

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Answer 1

One possible student version:

Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.

Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, Liu Fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. She immediately stopped, called 120 and practiced first aid. Soon, the ambulance came. When everything was OK, she left for school.

Such is Liu Fang, a helpful, positive and determined person. Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good, I strongly believe that she has done the right thing. As responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in need. Also, helping others means helping ourselves in a sense, doesn’t it?

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇书信写作。主要描述刘芳帮助受伤老人，把这件事情写成报道投稿，题目已经给定大致内容，写作时要注意适当增加内容，以保证文章的连贯性。文章第二段第一句Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, Liu Fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. 交代了故事的时间、地点、人物，运用简短的词组，说明事件的要素。第二段第二句，介绍了事情的经过，几个并列动词，准确地概括了事情的过程，同时对内容进行了适当的丰富拓展。第三段helpful, positive and determined，三个词语给予主人公积极的评价，显示了词汇量的丰富。句中合理使用连接词，是语句衔接的更加紧凑，流畅。并且使用到宾语从句，非谓语，以及反问句型，使文章增色不少。总结：写作时，要用简练词句明确的表达出自己的观点。

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