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Here are my points ¡£We students of today paid much attention to our lessons and knew little of society though it's not our fault ¡£A holiday is the best time to make up for that ¡£Taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice ¡£What is learned in books can't have the same (deep ) effect on us what is learned through experience ¡£In social practice £¬we can surly make progress in both knowledge and ability ¡£Besides £¬taking a part-time job £¬we may get paid £¨be paid £© more or less to help our families ¡£Thus £¬I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in holidays£¬if possible ¡£

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