Question

As time passing by, young students from all over the world get together at one of the sixteen conservation camps. The aim is to help protecting the countryside and its wildlife.

Many animals and plants are in danger of disappear forever. The dormouse, a kind of mouse, for example, needs woodland plants for food and trees to stay. It’s habitat is being destroyed by man and it needs our help to survive.

Through this activity you will learn about the nature and how to protect it. Our trained leaders will company you and tell you everything what you need to know. Because of this, you needn’t to have any experience, just energy and enthusiasm. You will explore the countryside and work to ensure the survival of hundred of animals and plants.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 As改为With 或 passing 改为 passes

 Protecting---- protect

 Disappear---- disappearing

 stay∧in.

 It’s ---- Its

 去掉 the（nature前）

 company 改成accompany 

 that或去掉what

 needn’t 后面去掉to

 hundred改成hundreds

【解析】

试题分析：

 As是连词后面应该接句子，passing 改为 passes，也可以把as改为With，用with符合结构

 考查词组：help （to） do帮助做…,help后面接protect

 of是介词，后面应该接动名词disappearing

 这是不定式做定语，不定式和名词trees之间是动宾关系，可是stay是不及物动词，要接介词in.

 It’s是it is的缩写，Its是“它的”

 去掉 the（nature前），因为nature表示“自然”的时候，不加定冠词

 company是名词“陪伴”，改成动词：accompany 

 这是定语从句，先行词是everything用 that引导定语从句，或去掉what

 needn’t是情态动词， 后面接动词原形，去掉to

 hundreds of是“许多”的意思，只有和具体的数字连用，hundred才是原形

考点：考查短文改错

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺。