Question

近年来, 很多中小学组织学生开展研学旅行活动, 通过游览、交际, 来认识自然和社会。你校也计划开展此项活动, 但是有些学生表示欢迎，也有些表示反对。请你写一篇120词左右的英语文章 (题目已给出), 谈谈你的看法并说明理由。

My View on Study Tour

 

Answer 1

My View On Study Tour

In recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours for students so that they can have a better understanding of life and society. Some students are crazy about such tours while others show their great concerns.

Personally, I think study tours play a critical role in developing students’ study interests. Most of the time, students acquire knowledge and skills from textbooks. By walking out of the campus, they can learn through their own experiences and observations. They can understand better about what they have learned from textbooks. Therefore their motivation and enthusiasm for study is greatly inspired. Besides, studying tours contributes a lot to shaping a student's life values and personalities. They become more confident in getting along with others, living in harmony with nature and admiring traditional culture.

Of course, we must put safety in the first place in the course of study four, which is also the major concern of our parents and schools.

【解析】考察半开放性作文

【写作指导】本文属于半开放性作文，要求谈谈对于：研学旅行活动的看法。属于议论文，所以使用第三人称和一般现在时的时态。要点：1.最近出现了研学旅行热；2.介绍研学活：通过游览、交际, 来认识自然和社会。3.你的看法：应该多进行这样的活动。4.理由：可以开阔视野，了解世界和社会，亲近大自然。

高中作文写作，要注意在写作之前，首先认真审题，并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来，这些单词、句型都应是经典的，不会错的。写的过程中，多注意灵活使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句。要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯，遇到专有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定语从句，强调唯一性。平时的英语作文就可以多尝试使用这些表达，考试时才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。

【一句多译】

1.在我个人看来，研学在看法学生兴趣方面起着很大的作用。

①Personally, I think study tours play a critical role in developing students’ study interests.

②From my point of view, I think study tours play a critical role in developing students’ study interests.

2.我们必须把安全放在第一位置，这也是很多家长和学校最担心的事情。

①we must put safety in the first place in the course of study four, which is also the major concern of our parents and schools.

②we must take safety into consideration, which is also the major concern of our parents and schools.