Question

【题目】假如你是红星中学高一（1）班学生李华，你的美国朋友Mike给你邮件说他将在今年暑假去Amsterdam旅游。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1.建议他租用自行车游览该市；

2.说明该市为何被称为“自行车之城”；

3.介绍公共自行车给该市带来的益处。

注意：1. 词数不少于60；

2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

Dear Mike，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike，

Glad to hear that you are going to visit Amsterdam. I just have learned a lot about Amsterdam in my English class. To fully enjoy this beautiful city, I think you can rent a public bike there.

Amsterdam is said to be the “City of Bikes” because of the convenience for bicycles. It is flat and therefore results in a really good city for bike riding. There are also plenty of places for bicycle parking and most streets in the city centre have a bicycle path. The “white bike” for public use has been popular for many years. Now the city has benefited a lot from the bikes. Both locals and tourists have been using the white bikes, so there is already less traffic in central Amsterdam. And people have been enjoying city centre streets without cars for many years.

I’m sure you will enjoy your trip on the bike. Have fun and do not forget to share your photos!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文为提纲类作文，按照出题者的要求针对Mike暑假去Amsterdam旅游这一情况回复邮件，给出一些建议。首先考生要简单描述得知Mike暑假去Amsterdam旅游这一情况：Glad to hear that you are going to visit Amsterdam. 然后直接切入正题，也就是给出一些建议。文章的主要部分要将Amsterdam和“City of Bikes”紧密联系起来。考生可以先描述“City of Bikes”这一称号的由来，例如Amsterdam is said to be the “City of Bikes” because of the convenience for bicycles. 然后分部分详细解释。在介绍Amsterdam和bike之间的关系同时，就可以顺其自然地提到自行车给这个城市带来的好处，例如：Both locals and tourists have been using the white bikes, so there is already less traffic in central Amsterdam，并不需要另起一段单独强调。