题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I will say something about a foreign place that I want to stay for a leisure time.It is Britain,an European country. Here is my reasons.First,there're lots of tourism destinations in Britain,with millions of people come from all over the world to enjoy.I am strongly attracting.Moreover,there are many great people I admired a lot.such as Shakespeare, Dickens and so on.
If I can go to Britain,I will spend at least one and two days in London.Then I will pay a visit to Shakespeare hometown myself to know him better.And I will visit to people in the countryside to have a better understanding of the local culture.
【答案】1.第一句:that改为where;
2.第二句:an改为a;
3.第三句:is改为are;
4.第四句:come改为coming;
5.enjoy后加them;
6.第五句:attracting改为attracted;
7.第六句:admired改为admire;
8.第七句:and改为or;
9.第八句:Shakespeare改为Shakespeare's;
10.第九句:去掉to;
【解析】这篇短文介绍我想去的一个外国城市,及其理由。
1.该句that后面是一个定语从句,修饰先行词a foreign place,从句中stay是不及物动词,关系词在从句中做地点状语,应该用关系副词where.故把that改为where.
2.European读音是以辅音开头,前面的不定冠词应该用a.故把an改为a.
3.Here放在句首,句子的主语应该是my reasons,根据主谓一致,谓语用are.故把is改为are.
4.该处是with的复合结构“with+宾语+宾补”,come在此处应该是分词做宾补,与宾语millions of people之间是主动关系,应该用现在分词。故把come改为coming.
5.enjoy是及物动词,后面跟宾语,根据句意表示有来自世界各地的上百万人来欣赏这些旅游胜地,所以enjoy后面用them代指lots of tourism destinations.故填上them.
6.句中的attracting修饰主语I不合适,attracting修饰事物,表示“吸引人的”,attracted修饰人,表示“被吸引的”。故把attracting改为attracted.
7.根据该句主句时态there are,推知此处时态也应是现在时,主语是第一人称,谓语用动词原形。故把admired改为admire.
8.one or two days表示一两天,是固定短语。故把and改为or.
9.该句表示莎士比亚的家乡,应该用Shakespeare的所有格Shakespeare’s.故把Shakespeare改为Shakespeare’s.
10.visit是及物动词,直接加名词作宾语。故把to去掉。