Question

 

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。 

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 

注意：*1. 每处错误仅限1词； 

*2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One  

day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father /\ the money.  

But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went

to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month  

after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school

my own bicycle. 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One  

                              friends                               one 

day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father /\ the money.  

                           which                                   for 

But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went

                                             I  

to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month  

                                              when 

after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on  

later    gave 

my own bicycle. 

friend---friends

【解析】考查名词数的变化。Most of 决定了名词必须用复数形式。

it—one

【解析】考查代词用法。it代替同一个，one指同类里边的一个，此处我希望我也能有一辆，与前面提到的是一类。

that---which

【解析】考查非限制性定语从句关系词。非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用that.

the money前加for

【解析】考查介词用法。此处ask my father的目的应该是钱。ask my father与 the money之间需要加表目的的介词。

He----I

【解析】考查代词用法。由前句he said he could only give me half of the money. 和后句的myself.可知此处应该改为I.

if---when

【解析】考查连词用法。按照句意应该是一个月后，当我给他看钱的时候，可知此处应该用when。

after---later

【解析】考查副词用法。此处用副词，不能用连词。

gives---gave

【解析】考查动词时态。按照上下文叙述的都是发生地事情。

去掉happy前的much.

【解析】考查副词用法。此处how与happy之间不需要加任何词。