Question

高中阶段学习比较紧张，正确的学习方法尤为重要。下表显示了两位同学不同的学习方法

请简述并发表你的观点。

 

学习方法	李华	王海
白天	上课专心听讲，尽可能经常向老师请教疑难问题.	上课打瞌睡，漏掉了许多要点.
晚上	花较少时间完成作业，早点休息，上课经常保持旺盛的精力.	花较多的时间完成作业，熬夜学习，导致注意力无法集中.

 

注意：1．词数：100~120，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

2．短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：参考词汇： attentively 专心 energetic 精力旺盛

concentrate on 集中精力于 effectively 有效地

Li Hua and Wang Hai are two students of Senior Three. Both of them work hard but they have different learning methods.____________________________________________

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Li Hua and Wang Hai are two students of Senior Two. Both of them work hard but they have different learning methods．Li Hua listens to her teachers attentively, tries to catch everything that the teachers say in class and consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems．Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, so it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day．

However, Wang Hai has quite a different way of learning．He likes to sit up late at night doing his homework, so he often feels sleepy in class．As a result, he misses lots of key points and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework, which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing．

In my opinion, Li Hua learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself．So I prefer her learning method．

【解析】

【试题分析】这是一篇叙述性地议论文写作。依据表格所提供的信息，先根据提示表述李华和王海的学习方法，然后再发表自己的关于学习方法的观点。要求：词数：100~120，短文的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。且短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】范文用了一些高级的句型，使得文章水平在一个高的层面，如: tries to catch everything that the teachers say in class and consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems．定语从句；it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day．it 固定句式；it usually takes him more time to finish his homework, which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing．非限制性定语从句。还采用了一些比较好的短语：as often as possible，sit up late，In my opinion等，同样有一些好的衔接词，使得文章读起来通顺，有序：However, ．As a result,

考点：考查应用文写作。