Question

【题目】美国某中学举办英语暑假训练营，开设以下课程：cooking,swimming,giving first-aid,playing football/ basketball。假定你是李华，请你写封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。

内容包括：1.你感兴趣的一门课程；2.为什么想学这门课程；3.你期望从中学到什么。

注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir/Madam,

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】One Possible Version

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am very glad that your school will hold the English summer camp which contains many courses, such as cooking, swimming, giving first-aid and so on.

I want to attend a course about giving first-aid because it is important for us to learn some knowledge about first aid in our daily life. If a person gets injured, he needs medical care before a doctor can be found. At that time, one second really counts. After graduation, I plan to devote my life to medical research. Hopefully, the course will help me a lot to deal with some common injuries.

I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于应用文写作，要求写一封申请信，报名参加一项课程。使用第一人称和一般现在时。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系等等。

本文亮点：1. 要点齐全，内容充实。2. 语言连贯，详略得当。前两个要点言简意赅，重点表述第三个要点，添加了具体细节，过渡自然，使文章饱满。本文的结构如下：

1）我感兴趣的课程：急救；

2）希望这个课程让我了解到更多与急救有关的知识；

3）为什么想学这些内容：如果一个人受伤了，他需要医疗护理才能找到医生。在那个时候，一秒钟真的很重要。毕业后，打算把自己的一生奉献给医学研究。希望这门课能帮我解决一些常见的伤病问题。