Question

【题目】假定你是身在英国的交换生李华,学习之余你想在周末到当地一家咖啡馆兼职。请根据下面招聘广告写一封应聘信。

Work for COFFEE BEANS

Every cafe at COFFEE BEANS has the same aims: to create family-like teams and to give excellent customer service. Join us as a Team Member, Assistant Manager or Cafe Manager, depending on your skills and experience.

—choose the hours you work

—get management experience

—share your love of coffee

Email us at jobs@coffeebeans. co. uk

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear sir or madam,

I’m writing in answer to your advertisement to apply for a post of the Team Member. Unlike most of my Chinese friends and classmates, I like coffee instead of tea. I like the rich fragrance of coffee and the cultures and traditions involved in it. Moreover, COFFEE BEANS is famous for its service and management, so I want to work for it and get management experience which is beneficial for my future career choice. I think your family like teams will make me feel at home and I'll make as many contributions as I can to the cafe. Finally, as a student, I think I can work for two whole days at weekends.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是身在英国的交换生李华，学习之余你想在周末到当地一家咖啡馆兼职。请根据下面招聘广告写一封应聘信。第二，人称以第一人称为主。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为两段。第一段，写信的目的；自己的爱好、这份工作对于自己的益处和自己的优势等。第二段，期待回复。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语：apply for，instead of，service and management，be beneficial for，make me feel at home等。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子：which引导的定语从句Moreover, COFFEE BEANS is famous for its service and management, so I want to work for it and get management experience which is beneficial for my future career choice.省略that的宾语从句 Finally, as a student, I think I can work for two whole days at weekends.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接：unlike，moreover，so，finally等。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。