Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As Christmas is coming, I plan to buy something for my parent. What I want to give back is a VIP card of a health club but neither of them is doing enough exercise. My father works very hardly as a teacher, spending most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often bury herself in her books. Therefore, all of them should exercise more from now on.

I want to give them this card to express my love and thanks for them. I hope that they will be able to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends here. At the same time, I hope that they can take care their health.

Answer 1

【答案】

As Christmas is coming, I plan to buy something for my . What I want to give is a VIP card of a health club neither of them is doing enough exercise. My father works very as a teacher, spending most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often herself in her books. Therefore, of them should exercise more from now on.

I want to give them this card to express my love and thanks them. I hope that they will be able to get in the health club and make more friends . At the same time, I hope that they can take care their health.

【解析】略