题目内容

高考越来越近了,很多高考生家长都为孩子请来高考保姆(nurse),学校挂高考倒计时牌,每天上午、下午第一节课前,由老师带领全班学生喊口号……对于家长和学校的这些做法人们褒贬不一。
请根据以上说明、写作要点和写作要求,为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。
写作要点:
1.赞成者观点;
2.反对者观点;
3.自己的观点。
写作要求:
1.短文词数不少于100;
2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数;
3.可根据情况增减细节,详略得当;
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇:倒计时牌countdown board 口号slogan
With less than 60 days before the College Entrance Examinations, _________________
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Many parents hire nurses to take care of their children, some schools put up countdown boards in the classrooms and every day before the first class in the morning or afternoon teachers shout encouraging slogans together with their students
Some people are in favour of these measures, saying that they will keep up the students’ fighting spirits and help them achieve success in their final exams. Others think differently. They believe students can only perform their best when they are not stressful.
As a Senior 3 student, I understand why schools and parents behave the ways they do, but the more you hurry, the less process you are likely to make. Only by being happy and confident can we eventually work miracles.

试题分析:本文是一篇议论文。文章给出了简单的汉语提示,这要求考生成文时要充分发挥自己的想象力。将文章内容自然的表达出来。成文时应注意以下几点:1.采用三段成文法:(1)叙述现象;(2)文章的重点,正反双方的观点;(3)发表我的看法。2.时态:用一般现在时为主;3.人称:第三人称;4.恰当使用高级词汇、短语和句型,提高文章的档次;5.适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章表达自然、流畅。
【范文亮点】使用了非谓语动词短语作状语:saying that they will keep up the students’ fighting spirits and help them achieve success in their final exams. 使用了倒装句:Only by being happy and confident can we eventually work miracles.使用了从句:I understand why schools and parents behave the ways they do,They believe students can only perform their best when they are not stressful. 短语:be in favour of ;keep up
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1、以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2、然后以约120个词谈谈你对“目标的重要性”的看法,内容包括:
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