题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,计划去英国伦敦旅游并顺道看望朋友Sue。请给Sue写一封信,内容要点如下:
1. 到达时间;
2. 旅游安排;
3. 约Sue见面。
注意:1.词数80字左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Sue,
It’s been ages since we last saw each other. I really miss you. How are you doing recently I am going to Britain for my summer vacation and my flight will arrive in London on AEth in July. I plan to stay in London for ten days. Then I will fly to LA. I have already made reservations at King Hotel. Hopefully we can find some time to get together. I really miss the time we spent together in Beijing when you came to China. Please tell me in advance when you will be free so that I can make arrangements to see you. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信,告知朋友到伦敦的一些安排。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
写作内容:1.告知到达时间
2.谈论旅游安排
3.约定见面事宜
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
plan to; my summer vacation; make reservations; get together; in advance; make arrangements; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. It’s been ages since we last saw each other.
2. I have already made reservations at King Hotel
3. Hopefully we can find some time to get together.
4. Please tell me in advance when you will be free so that I can make arrangements to see you
5. I am looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改