题目内容
【题目】最近我校对高一学生入学一个多月来的学习生活适应情况做了一个调查,情况如下。请你用英语表达下表的调查内容,并提出个人观点。
60%的学生认为 | 40%的学生认为 | 我的观点 |
1.高中学习很有压力; 2.科目难度大,课后作业多; 3.没有时间参加课外活动 | 1.适应并喜欢高中生活; 2.课程更有趣,活动更丰富,受益匪浅 | …… |
要求:1.词数100个左右;
2.文章开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:course n. 课程;benefit vt. 对……有益;stressful adj. 有压力的 stress /pressure n. 压力; survey n. 调查
Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have adapted to the life in senior high school.
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【答案】Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have adapted to the life in senior high school.
As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. 60% of the students hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, the subjects they are learning now are obviously more difficult. Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities.
On the contrary, others say they have adapted to the new life and have begun to enjoy it. They say that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful, which surely benefit them a lot.
As far as I'm concerned, we should balance our study and other activities and do everything efficiently. Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life
【解析】这是一篇正反观点类作文,题目列出了一些要点,要求考生在叙述完题中观点后,说出自己的观点。在写这篇作文时,应注意以下几点:
1、写作文之前首先要审题:文体是议论文,时态用一般现在时。2、观点类议论文可使用一些固定的连接词和句型。例如: Students’ views/ideas/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person. Some people say/think/believe that… However, others hold the view that……As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the first/second view. /I would like… The reasons are as follows. 3、应完整叙述正反两方包含的所有原因,并使用恰当连接词时行文流畅。可使用长短句结合的方法使文章句式多变。
【范文亮点】
1.使用The reasons are as follows. Besides, Firstly, As far as I'm concerned等连接词和连接句,很好地组织了文章结构,使上下文衔接自然。2. 使用了非限制性定语从句: they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities. 状语从句:As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided.句式高级。 3. 灵活运用了一些较高级的句式、固定搭配和动词: is far from, balance … and …, Only in this way , do endless homework等使文章句子表达清晰,给人留下深刻印象。